Black Poetry : CRAZY WORDS

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lilcherry76, Oct 13, 2004.

  1. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    writing it down,
    to please the smile.
    and giving my all,
    well-------------for a little while.
    no time doth tell,
    when catching will come.
    searching for answers,
    who has them all-no one.
    and it's okay,
    because everyone is a historian.
    don't try to fix the broken,
    speak your voice so you won't be ignoring him.

    BUT..............

    that's just stupid,
    not even thinking about the way i write.
    just endless letters,
    and words of weak power-but strong might.
    speak clearly everyone,
    don't say what you don't mean.
    because all would be false,
    you see---then see the unseen.
    so your short turned answers of nice,
    and tyte scribe.
    aren't as long as i hoped,
    but i can only ask so much because of my youth as a child.
    but i love it,
    when you reply at all because it shows so much.
    you reach out,
    you give love,
    you ease the pain with a touch................
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister poet...
    u put the nail in the coffin on this one...
    for we never know...how we touch another
    with our words or the time we take to feel
    their pain, joy, happiness...or to listen
    their thoughts...and know their struggle

    It's all about love...all about love
    which extends to compassion and empathy...
    the very things that make us all here...."A family"...

    Digging the flow sis!
    Sage
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Crazy Words and crazy aches, I can relate so well.

    You're right, it is indeed an act of love.

    This is some very special love here!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Diggin this flow...
    it speaks loud and true
    you laid it well
    flow on....Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    truely heart felt indeed on point
    never know how it make one feel
    and no one knows all but try to
    make da call and sharing brings warmth
    as a whole family u fit the bill
    very well pose'd here sista................
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you all help me to :climb: the hardest mountains, and yet i only know you by words.................no better way aye? thank you all one love.....
     
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    Nubian One Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so true..

    nice piece..

    .. keep 'em coming
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, this is why I consider myself lucky, well all of us here are lucky, to be a part of a forum such as this. I appreciate this vibe poet of the week.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhh, girl, it's ALL about the love, to be sure. This is beautiful. Flow on, poet of the week.
     
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    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simply beautiful. Nice piece. You are a talented writer.
     
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