Black Poetry : Crazy Pen

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by aqueenpassing, Jul 25, 2003.

  1. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Crazy Pen


    I just went crazy on the page
    using all the words I knew
    cascading the lines with reds
    pinks and blues

    Softly cuddling the spaces with
    soft silence from the ink mind
    peaks and valley flows of shadowed
    winks

    I got crazy with the pen voicing
    my opinions visions of my minds
    scenery within

    I let the colors of my words erupt
    like a volcano filled to the brim
    of hot lava scribes bursting out
    with liquid bubbles like a cork
    from a champagne bottle
    L
    E
    T

    Them run free loosely


    I let the stanzas run down the paper
    on the sides in the crevices of each drop
    they form a melody of spoken dreams

    I just got crazy with the pen started
    writing upside down twirled the paper
    around and started backwards with the
    a gentle stroke

    Then I realized I was woke!

    AqueenPassing
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let da crazy pen flow
    coz ya words felt like
    never before
    tyte scribe on da real
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was sooooo cool, such imagery.........I'm an artist and as I read this, feeling your flow...it felt like it does when I approach the canvas..............This was a great flow Queen!:spinstar:
     
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    The crazy pen became a lyrical paintbrush and the result was beautiful :)
     
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    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks All

    Everyone,
    Thank you so much for your comments and kind words I truly appreciate you all

    Blessing all
    AqueenPassing
     
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