Black Poetry : Crazy Mind(Ryhmes)

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  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ooooh me and my mind
    OOOhhh me I think I'm going blind......
    No,no,no did you just say that to me?
    Oh so you said naw iight I see
    Confused aren't you reading what I write and what I say?
    I feel like that on some days
    Poetry just flowing from my mouth and heart
    I can never see me and this black,blue,or red pen apart
    See we best friends the best I mean like roaches and house infesting pests
    We can't leave eachother alone
    Asleep in my bed trying to dream about tommorrow or a pretty unicorn
    "Pssssst,psssst,"Wake up and come use me
    I'm tired can't I please get my beauty sleep
    I hear it calling me to jot down what's in my mind what's plaguing me or making me smile miles on end
    Like my sins taking them to the altar and repent
    Tugging on my heart sayin,"baby you don't want this to stop do you huh do ya do ya."
    I can't slide down like the sloppy tomatoes and lettuce on a suppa woppa
    YELLIN IN MY EARS,"DON'T LET THESE HATAS STOP YA."
    Now I feel like I'm really just wasting your time,but like I said before it's all these ryhmes inside my crazy mind.......
     
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    SkinDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm feeling this fo real.
     
  3. river

    river Watch Her Flow MEMBER

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    Studies show that the gene for insanity and the gene for creativity is the same gene. We are blessed to be poets, no? But sometimes it seems we could go either way.

    flow on now
     
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    that was :hot: ...I like your style...don't let your pen down...
     
  5. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you a lot and I WON'T LET MY PEN DOWN
     
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    Hmmmmmm simply delicious,
    The way it grabbed me was vicious.
    Enticing to my mind and my eyes.
    Oh, I have to run. Look how time flies. :devil:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wordz of thoughts tyte drop
     
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    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    REPLY TO SENSUALREALITY

    Oh me! Oh my! what a flow from your kind!
    Ooohhh me! "I don't think I'm going at all blind"
    Yes! yes, yes! I did say that much to thee!
    Oh so said I " I'm bored! Off to destee to ski!
    Confused reading what I write and what I say
    Well let me make it clear to you today
    Poetic imagination is FINE ART!
    And from your heart you have a wonderful start
    I pray that you and your pens never depart!
    Your pens have power and WISDOM TO IMPART!
    Best friends of yours do what ever you request
    I comprehend the house being possessed
    By roachs and house infest pests that need home
    Loveing lovers won't leave each other alone
    Very great very great indeed MY POET!
    Wonderful story indeed! Glad you told it!
     
  9. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Luv ya All

    :hot: :hot: :hot: THANK YOU THANK YOU REALLY REALLY THANK YOU lol
     
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