Black Poetry : Crazed Emotions

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  1. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Crazed Emotions

    I can’t find the words to describe how I feel
    It’s so vivid in my mind that it doesn’t seem like it could be real
    What I am feeling has never really been accepted
    These kinds of feelings I’ve always neglected
    I’ve felt it wrong and sick to feel that way
    Then all of a sudden my whole world changed one day
    I made love to a good friend of mine who’s also a girl
    It all happened so fast it sent me into a whirl
    I’m feeling so many different types of emotions
    Excitement, embarrassment, anger, and happiness are all the notions
    It’s super hard for me to admit that it turned me on
    I’m so confused all sorts of emotions have spawn
    I can’t ever look at her the same way anymore for sure
    I just want to rip her clothes off every time I see her
    Her body is so perfect and sweet it is totally unforgettable
    Hot sexy mama with bangin’ curves is her fable
    Sometimes it makes me feel so embarrassed when she is around
    The images of me making love to her goes round and round
    She teases me now because she knows I want her
    I have to learn to manage these feeling and defer
    I wish she could understand these feelings that I feel
    Coming to terms with what we did will help me heal
    It’s a part of me that I never knew existed in me
    Learning that it is okay to feel this way is my plea
    So, all I ask for is a little bit of understanding for the time being
    When I look at you that is what I am seeing
    Please stop teasing me or let me do it again
    Fill me in a little bit so I can stop feeling this pain
    The pain of wanting something I can’t have slams me onto my knees
    You’ve started waves with in me like those from the rough seas
    Know you are the only woman that’s made me feel this way
    So I’ve laid my feelings out on the table and there’s nothing left to say

    One_Love
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    life is already crazed

    don't go making it more crazed

    chill and don't over or out do yourself

    hang in there the truth will come to you

    if and when you are truly ready to accept it

    don't like your emotions run your life to ruin

    because only YOU can understand and control your emotions

    peace

    good to see you back
     
  3. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Definitely diggin this.
     
  4. watzinaname

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    Such strong emotions, so well executed within this scribe. Putting it all on the table, can be difficult, it can take guts. Now that you have, the ball is in her court.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling you and da emotions and to be upfront and open real and true
    will less what seem crazy and let dem feeling go free to free ya mind

    whewwww one_love
     
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