Black Poetry : Cradle the Pen

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  1. whisper

    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I cradle the pen
    for the worth within
    able to expose the soul
    and open the heart
    salts water on my face
    spits on my lips
    causes thunder in my ear

    releases the demons
    and recieves the light
    let other----pass me by
    and smear it off
    i cradle the pen
    like my best friend
    answers back it does
    lies to me sometimes too
    covers me with love
    shares it powers and free me from the chase
    i cradle the pen.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh i like....much love for this...
     
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    the power da pen pose within
    nice scribe poet
     
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    You've expressed so wonderfully, a lil' something I can feel.
     
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    This is powerful! You are on a roll tonight, whisper.
     
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    cradle da pen
    in da lions den
    in da state pen
    in a reunion of kin
    from 10 to 10
    then do it again
    some thoughts deserve substanance
    so if you got an extra pen
    then lend....

    nice poem
    peace
    khasm
     
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    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everyone i glad you enjoyed the read
    nice mix Khasm13
     
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