Black Poetry : Crackhead

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Apr 12, 2004.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sitting on the street corner...
    legs wobbly...
    fingering the cracks in the street...
    she would regress back to childhood
    and suck her thumb....
    and lick the air
    for any sign of any aroma
    that seem familiar
    she would take a knife and cut herself
    maybe the crack would flow instead
    of the red that would spill to the floor...

    the sky fell on top of her...
    everything would cave in...
    but it didn't matter....
    the only thing that mattered
    was the powdered residue
    that stuck to her lips...

    supple breast would get sucked
    by many men just so she could pay
    for what was a temporary euphoria...

    outside of her world...
    she twiched and her nerves
    would shake...and sob....and die..
    under the wieght of her burden...

    Her bones where heavy...

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  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My word, the story, your words capture us and take us to that God awful place. You're simply astounding.
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fo the love, watz...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey

    Story,

    :bowdown: here you go shining once again :bowdown: , a very deep and nice scribe this is.
    :thanks:
    Nita
    :heart:
     
  5. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love nita...
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed u expressin it well feeling all ya pen
    very well done lil sis........
     
  7. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Story?Is that you girl?Writing this poem?lol I LOVE IT you captured my attention and heart GRRRRRRREAT JOB :jumping: :jumping:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    okay smarty pants...I'm convinced :huh:
    I dig your style very much...I told you that your are a very intelligent girl and have no doubt about it...I am very much proud of you...you got it going on.
    luv to ya...queentswana
     
  9. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    heavy, solemn, and real....

    really feeling your style.......

    mo power

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Moving Sister...

    so moving...

    .............so true


    continue on...Poet
     
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