Black Poetry : Crack

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  1. PatriceCQueen

    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like icebergs
    Breaking apart due to global warming
    Drifting into warmer waters
    Melting thousands of years of debris and gases
    Trapped in their moments of time

    Can you tell the planet is melting
    In places and faces where icicles stand
    As year round evidence of no change
    Having more warm days
    The encroachment of deserts

    Rain forest depletion
    Silencing lifetime of cures
    Whose hiccup never sounded to us
    Like the annoying sound of torrential rain
    That has continued 4 months too long

    After which some wonder can it be true
    How Noah became long after a point
    When it was said by him that a time would come that never was
    The belly of the Ark filled with two by two
    For only the animals did not have choice

    Now we are forced to ask ourselves
    Who did not know of the reality
    That mankind is changing world temperature
    How we have negatively impacted the planet
    That we have used war to massacre human kind
    Begetting the genocide of man
    Through neglect of planet earth

    Patrice C Queen
     
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    changes that have came before us as humans
    tyte joint well felt too.....................................
     
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    the crack that man has started
    now there saying we must protect Mother earth
    scientists now acting retarded

    nature has grown tired of the abuse
    that's why nature itself has become recluse

    she's taken up her skirts
    and left men with nothing but rough dirt

    because they didnt give back what she given
    having those poor farmers to continue to diggin

    to the best part of Mother Earth
    she's punish us by giving us the pungent dirt

    trees man has cut have they forgot about recycling
    have you cut the car off today and went bicycling

    see man wants to be aware of the total neglect
    when for many years they was screaming oh what the heck

    i'll make a change next year
    causing Mother Nature to constantly cry her tears

    Cause the other elements to be mad
    because their Mother Earth is sad

    So therefore came Fire
    and the Wind brought the whole entire

    because man destroying the one things that need to exist
    The elements are mad as Hell and they continue to spit

    upon us before it too late
    For us to experience the true meaning of the same fate

    so in our part we must care for her
    nourish her

    so that we have a cleaner environment
    scientist we appreciate some of the new discoveries
    but it's time to stop the unnecessary experiment

    Love her once again
    And maybe just maybe Earth, Wind, Fire will be our Friends again!!!!!!!!!:kiss1:


    just a little something for ya babygirl!!:star:
     
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    The world is changing
    The world is turning in a cycle
    I hope people wake up
    Nice Piece Patrice
     
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    We live on the Earth as if everything will constantly be replenished, and unfortunately that just isn't the case. I appreciate the message you bring.
     
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    everyone has their day in the sun...
    mother earth was here b4 us
    and will be here after us....

    nice scribe...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    thank you for lending your mind and hearts to this piece

    I apoliogize for not responding indivisually as your responses each justify personal response.

    however i am limited in my capacity to focus this week so forgive this minimal response
    khasm RICH tantrum Nevar Watzinaname

    Nevar u had a awesome response

    Patrice
     
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    thanks for your warming comment!!!!!!!!!:star:
     
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    Lawd look what you wrote. I am so glad i read this again and digested it plenty. This is an awsome response and I enjoy your scribe and want you to keep writing for you have a lot to say and we need to hear it. NEVAR underestimate her

    Peace

    Patrice
     
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    thankyou for your kind words again. how they do expect for beauty to grow if they dont do what it takes to nourish.:spinstar:
     
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