Black Poetry : CRACK HIS WINDSHIELD AND MOVE ON!

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  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    When she cracked your windshield
    Perhaps she was merely acting out
    The pain you gave her heart

    Maybe the rock was your love
    Which she was throwing in tantrum
    In an attempt for you to stop

    Maybe she didn't realize
    That you wouldn't even see
    The broken-ness of she
    Only the new spent money

    To fix your broken glass

    Maybe she couldn't understand
    That there really is no comparison
    To her feelings and your car

    Maybe she didn't overstand
    That your benz defines
    Really who you are

    Maybe she didn't know
    That the car gave you the illusion
    Of being young and on top of the world

    Maybe she couldn't see it
    Because she was just a little girl

    Maybe she never thought
    You would try to break her
    Like she broke your glass

    But she must've realized it somehow
    Because she finally left your a**

    And maybe she's reminded of you
    Every time she looks and gazes at your son

    She fixed the broken glass of her heart
    And your car

    Well,

    Your just scheming to get another one

    Maybe next time instead of cracking your glass
    She'll pause and think a second
    And see your moving way to fast
    And decide to up and leave the past

    Maybe she'll do the brave thing and walk away
    No matter how she feels

    And pretend

    That the window divides you two
    And call it her very own
    WIND-SHIELD
     
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    Ya know, this perspective is truly enlightening; and I hope, as well, an encouragement to somebody out there who needs to read this. Maybe another woman will install her very own brand-new "wind-shield."


    And maybe, just MAYBE, some man out there will also see more than just the cracked, fractured, shattered and splintered glass and see the same ruin on a broken heart as well.


    FABULOUS PIECE, MISS LADY!
     
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    speakin from the perspective of having my car door kicked repeatedly...
    side window busted....
    and side mirror snatched off....thas sum bullshucks....regardless of the reason...
    but this was a dope piece....fa sho...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    Peace Sister Cherryblossom

    thank you kindly...

    very perceptive.. as I hope the person I wrote this for checks it out... and I hope she does install her brand new WIND-SHIELD...

    sister should know that we're here for each other and have all experienced this type of heartbreak in one way or another.....

    much love peace honor and respect
     
  5. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    guess u was freakin dem toes..nah.. lol

    it is some ish.. mayne..

    she broke my windshield and slashed my tires and i was the girlfriend at the time.. go figure...

    i guess i understand this part of a female tho.... i did it one time but i felt stupid so i gave him the doe to replace it...

    feel like if u gotta act like that then it ain't worth it....

    thanks for the love

    one
     
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    phynxofkemet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You got me....

    wow.... COSMIC HUG

    :10200::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::grouphug:

    And thank you for being YOU!
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    COSMIC HUG RIGHT BACK AT YA!

    THIS IS ABOUT US...

    THERE'S NO ME WITHOUT YOU SIS...

    ONE LOVE!
     
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    There was so much positivity and strength and truth in this...

    things are never what they seem

    Most def

    props sister MUCH props :read:
     
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    tyte drop but that's the kinda act that can get hurt deeper by, for a man car is his lady
    like his dog his best friend !...............lol
     
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    I really love

    that you and Br. Khasm responded the way that you did...

    I think alot of sisters know that a car... and the dog come before our feelings and there is no greater hurt then that...

    we put ya'll b4 anything when we're in love....

    just want to put the disclaimer to my sister's that i'm not encouraging destroying anyone's property.... only not to put urself out there and protect the sacred feelings that are urs to define and to protect ur heart with a WIND-SHIELD....

    thanks for the love...
     
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