Black Poetry : Cowboy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Antar, Apr 16, 2004.

  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    infamous temptation
    pushing me to lose myself in
    your depth
    leauges of seperation
    travel steps
    by taking breaths
    applying to situations
    without hestitation
    heating elements
    up
    lighter than air
    cruisin violently
    my pilot pumpin information
    through my circuitry
    electricity rushing
    through molecules of my body
    energizin my biography
    propelling an' inacting
    my philosophy
    enacting Jah's prophecy
    swept ashore
    booty
    left by a band of thieves
    exibit illustrious skills
    to expand, travel
    feel the story unravel
    subconciously (i)eye-battle
    to produce more rich
    substances pure
    to be revered like stocks
    of text
    fly family
    pictures hangin out
    above your mantle
    taking the pain of gambles
    strengthening amazingly
    like natural mutations
    of a frame one figured fragile
    flexible, agile
    grippin the pale horse
    unda death'es saddle
    ridin
    energizin
    pioneering the way for more
    trailblazing
    devastating
    creating immaculate
    oddities at the bizarre
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Antar

    Very well done. You write in rhythmic rhyme. I write that way as well.

    This piece has actually inspired me to write...what, I don't know. Anything. :lol:

    Anyway, this is nice. Keep it coming. Around here, you'll do nothing but get tighter.

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
  3. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for checkin me out...
    I'm glad that i could inspire you to flow (some mo) :)
    Das kool, i'm real humbled by that.
    You rite, bein up in here really helps you to grow..
    Peace

    one
    /antar
     
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    you have a nice beat to your flow...i was caught into fully...i like the mix of sensation and then poineering...nice mix...wonderful rap
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    keep the flowz coming...

    this one's unique for the forum...

    tyte!!
    jh.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this flowed like music tyte drop poet
     
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    You know, the beat of this helps us to envision those cowboys riding, keep flowing.
     
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