Black Poetry : "covered"

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lend me some sugar.. l am your neighbor
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    from the moment she's out the door
    she feels a pour of my prayer and protection
    knowing that God is our individual direction... she's guided

    mirror image of my Maker...
    l create
    form
    and fulfill grounds with gardens of peace...
    heartaches wither
    south winds cease..

    l am her lover priest...
    l am the ark when there's a flood
    covered by the blood of He...
    she resides in me
    safe and warm from all danger and harm..
    she goes her way
    not seeing the angels' swarm l sent her way...
    l am her quilt..
    her pillow as we lay..
    her sword her shield on and off the field...
    l am hers, she is mine
    together we rewrite and redefine.... life
    by the heat of all of my passion
    l watch as her soul refines into mine

    she's covered.
     
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    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace.


    J'hiah, This is a masterpiece, I love the vibes, real passionate and stimulating. Keep flowin'.
     
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    Now this was sweet.

    Really nice.
     
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    love it
    i feel the passionate...
    love it
     
  5. LISTERSCRIBIN'

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    beautiful, as always, dear poet. i'm lovin' it, ofcourse. it reminds me of one of my pieces called cover me. i posted it about two or three years ago, you may remember it, i'm not sure. this piece is absolutely just that...beautiful spiritual love poetry at it's finest, dear poet.
     
  6. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my peeps,
    thanx..
    LISTERSCRIBIN'....
    your presence was more than enough and l accept those words as well :thanks:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 awesome flowin brutha wow !!
    u laid it out like da red carpet
     
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    she is blessed as you are blessed...
    covered because of your covenant

    Beautiful!
     
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    word...
    if more black brothers felt this
    we would be betta off as a people...daps son
    peace
    khasm
     
  10. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well [email protected]

    this is sooo tyte, madd deep.
     
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