Black Poetry : Coup de grace

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Jul 17, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hear news so true ~
    Hymn peace atoned
    Consoling,
    Abiding,
    Conniving...
    Beings there pursue

    What could redo
    No shortage of fools
    Conspiring,
    Vying,
    Them lying...
    Doing what they do

    Any can rule
    Who doing whom
    Wild thing,
    Wilding,
    Your thing,
    Waging war of doom

    Hear news so true
    Coup de grace too
    Surprises,
    Despises,
    Alive in...
    Sabotaging you


    Darryl Abdu Omari :fight:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was a deep tyte drop bruh!!
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a tight drop
    digging it
     
  4. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    drop it and drop it hard!
    so glad you laid this down, 1poet
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This makes me think of the world we live in, a constant war of wills. Keep droppin them.
     
  6. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There are multi-dimensional realms but never enough understanding. Thanks.
     
  7. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel where you're comming from, and the piece was very nice, thanks for sharing this with us.
     
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    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh this is the atomic bomb
    Its so thight I got stuckk
    thank you for posting
     
  9. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A belated thanks to you, Alpha Male.
     
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