Black Poetry : Country Stroll

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  1. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Country Stroll
    (Starving Ave 1967)

    “Umm Good” gurl you like
    some good old plump and
    tender navy beans

    I could savoir every ounce
    of you, bet you never had
    any good old loving like this

    I just wanna love you long
    love you strong gurl
    You so sweet and tender

    You remind me of juicy beef roast
    with some old fashioned mashed potatoes
    milked just right

    “Gurl” come on over hea”
    let me sop you up like some
    gravy and biscuits

    He kept talking and I kept walkin
    after all that who would want
    even consider being with an old
    Geezer like that

    Let me just buy him a plate a
    midnight special at Johnny Walkers Café
    and tell him to keep the change!
    As I keep strolling Starving Ave
    glad I did not mention my name!

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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :laugh: this reminded me of an old neighbor of mine. He had to be older than my Big Mama! still to this day when I visit the old nieghborhood, he still asks when I'm going to make him a married man. I liked this a lot. Keep on flowin Queen!
     
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    yes this took me somewhere too
    tyte visional flow
     
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    Queen, such versatility in your writing, great imagery and story line. Great read!
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lol: @ queen.....

    This was well felt and well spoken!!!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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