Black Poetry : Countdown

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tantrum, Nov 20, 2005.

  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (I found Him)

    Ten I the one you've been waiting for
    Waiting for the man-With the gift in his hand
    The dream seems to be-who gone knock off the kid
    The kid got some flow-man some flow you should dig
    But ten darn days I haven't seen the kids
    Nine is the lives that when I ride-My nine is my friend
    Who gone play with me now-Nine more times-Put the fear in your heart
    Nine quite devine-Its a time for the lost
    Nine is the days I've been looking for him now
    Eight boss in the house-Im the King-Who gone doubt
    Im hard teflon-Pump back stretch arms
    Close eyes death comes-rest in peace young one
    Seven lucky number-You gone get some relief
    Cant no man bail you out-Man deaths on the sreets
    Man death is the point of this journey seek
    You be yourning and turning you scard of defeat
    Six times remind of the life that you took
    And you thought wouldnt find I would let off the hook
    Those my kids mother----- I kill you for show
    Five-Four-Three
    Two kids what I had for you killed
    You could have robbed my house
    But you killed my kids
    Could've took my life but you took my kids
    I gave you the money
    The keys and watch
    You hard no regards when you the gun in there mouth
    Made em cry
    Made em beg
    I said thats all that I had
    (pause)
    One shot
    (pause)
    One shot
    (pause)
    One shot
    Is all it took
    Now your lifes in my hands
    (Bang)

    Death is unpunishable
    Life is to cherished not taked away
    No man owns your future
    Your future is yours
    Look for that light inside
    He will protect you
    I promise this and more!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up !!!!!
     
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    You've got me looking for that light inside with this. Flow on poet of the week.
     
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    Stepping in as much as I do, keeps the physical of me still here, very touching piece poet, you dropped it well, thanks for sharing it
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the love poet
    It came to mind
    I think this is very touching
    Much love poets
     
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    this was very good and original...i liked this alot...
     
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