Quiet Poetry Lounge : COUNTDOWN..10-9-8-7-

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  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *COUNTDOWN*

    10. You got "ten" minutes ...to step out that door,
    and I never want to see, :nono: your black *** no more.

    09. "nine" minutes left...and I'm about to shout,
    so spare me the drama, and get the hell out.

    08. "eight" years of lying, yet I pushed it aside,
    you got your wheels outside...get in it, and ride.

    07. Now you're down to "seven" minutes, and you seem to :uhoh: look lost,
    but when you tamper with "Queen-ness" ...one must pay the cost.

    06. Out of every year, "six" months of them... :crying: I'm crying,
    I'm tired of all the stupid ****...I'm tired of slowly dying.

    05. "five" times I tried to leave...but your power :sand: took over,
    all these years, I was high on you, but today I'm mighty sober.

    04. You got "four" minutes to go, do you have your clothes pack?
    you have pumped my heart dry...and there's no turning back.

    03. Do you remember when we were.. "three" steps from the alter?
    and you promised my dad, you'd take good care of his daughter?

    02. We had "two" hearts :heart: :heart: rolled into one...and you took my heart for granted,
    but I'll find true love :love: again...somewhere on this planet.

    01. You got "one" minute, to beg me...to let you stay,
    but I can't take no more ******** ...so be on your way!

    0. Nothing "0" is what you brought to the door...
    and I can't take it, can't take it, can't take it...no more.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wild to da point 10 step program
    da breakdown !!!
     
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    Countdown to blast off, time for him to ship out. I liked the creative way you went about this, this was a fun read.
     
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    my Lord...
    i couldn't have said it better myself if i tried...smh
    you mos def laid this down queen...
    one love
    khasm
     
  5. queentswana

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    Thanks $$RICH$$...
    just trying to keep up with the big dogs ...we all at one time or another need that 10 step program :) ..luv ya...queentswana
     
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    I had so much fun doing it, it was something different. thanks for the luv and support on this....luv ya ...queen
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Comming from the "King of Rap" ...it made me smile just to know that you liked it, thanks for your time to show some luv.
    ...keep knocking um out
     
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