Quiet Poetry Lounge : Count Me Out!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by queentswana, Oct 31, 2005.

  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Count Me Out!

    Hey there love, got something on my mind,
    you know for a fact, that I know you're fione

    But I refuse to let you, roll me in slime
    and I knew it would just be, a matter of time

    That I would gather my strength and kick you to the curb
    I'm not down on your ********, or haven't you heard?

    I may be blind sometimes, but far from slow
    I gave birth to mankind, and that you know

    You just can't fool something, that gave you life
    my advice to you is...next time, think twice

    Most of us had to scream and shout...
    a lot of huffin and puffin, to push you out

    With one foot in heaven, the other near the grave
    all of that and more...is what we gave

    and for what?

    For somebody's son to trash me like dirt?
    the only thing you'll get here is your feelings hurt

    Games is what you're all about
    so do us both a favor...
    count me out

    I will not be added to your chain of fools,
    I never attended the "stay-dumb" school

    Nor have that "yellow bus" ever stopped at my house
    so again, I will repeat myself...
    count me out
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You tell them Sisi this was str8 tight....

    enjoyed this

    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Count Me In
    I want to show you more than lovers and friends
    I want to have your back to the very end
    I want to stand tall show you that a real man is here
    I've always be near-I got your back never shed tears
    I see many men not used to a strong black queen
    Maybe thats why they lack so im gone show you a strong black king
    Dont count me out
    I never let you down
    I never let your smile become a frown
    I never perpetrate myself to be more than I am
    I see your beauty and I cherish yeah
    Count me in
    The moment woman give birth is the moment I have no fear
    The moment a queen gives birth is the moment most men need you dear
    And the moment most men aren't there i'll show I care
    Count Me In
    Much Love sista beautiful piece!!
    I Loved It 4 Real
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So you want "in" my friend?

    Let's talk about you mending my heart again...
    on the way here, pick up that bottle of Gin:wine:

    And if you talk right, by the time we're done
    I'll know by then...that you're the one

    But remember my heart is still shattered and torn
    and with me, comes baggage, you must be warned

    so...

    If you're ready and willing to take on this mend...
    then I'm perfectly willing, to count you in

    thanks for the stop by, I enjoyed the flow with you
     
  5. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Come In


    I tell you this
    As you relax on some gin
    Im picking up fifths of hen
    I know you've been shattered time to let a real man in
    No more games I got plenty of hands
    Bring your baggage over here
    Im kind of clausterfobic but I can handle it dear
    Im your surgeon wheres your heart I can mend it my dear
    The perfect satisfaction is when your call me dear

    Your a wonderful poet 4 real stay poetic!
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, all hail to the queen for she hath spoken. You really brought that hammer down this time queent. And Tantrum, great flow back.
     
  7. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    QT...Glad to see that U haven't lost a step since ya absence...Glad U R back to bless us with ya wonderful poems and flow!


    Peace!
     
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    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow......i like how this was done
    and y'all collab tyte .................
     
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