Black Poetry : couldn't find a title so this'll do(WASTE OF TIME)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SensualReality, Apr 23, 2004.

  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Said you have everything and you won't take a thing for you journey now
    Everything's just grand got you like wow!
    But everything that's good don't last always
    Your smiles posted on billboards
    Smile and fake thanks on Music awards
    Think you did something to get there with your cold hits and memorable beats
    They are as repeated as The Ying Yang Twins with their skeet skeets
    Thugs or should I say wanna bes they tell their lies
    But don't say you a true cold hitta if ain't ready to die
    Sick of these cowards walking around thinkin people should kiss the ground
    They walk on
    Paths that have gone wrong
    Maybe they think because it's all this respect they get on the streets it make them who they are
    Straight ignorance and blindness got them so far
    People feed into what they say all the bling bling and Mary J.
    Got them puffin they la and spendin that cash raw
    Straight spillin it like water in a broken glass
    But how long will these tainted dreams last..........
    Long enough to watch the people they feed die
    Long enough to watch and they still try
    See what's happening with the communities all the dirt in its extremities
    The press say it's the hip hop that makes every soul and their pants drop
    But it's not........
    Let me tell you it's those who are like I said before ignorant ignoring the sight
    Open your eyes and shine the light
    If you're not going to do a thing,then there's no reason to complain right?
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cold truth in a tight, tight flow. Very nice, SR.
     
  3. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you and I spit nuffin' but the truth...cuz that's what I am real
    Thanx again :jumping:
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HOT DROP!

    Them's that know if flow it...flow on!!!!!!!!!!
    Like the pure raw truth of this piece...
    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE!
     
  5. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you much I will continue because you alls support encourages me :wave: :wave:
     
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    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is definitely the coldest bit of truth and i'm digging your style. Much love to you ma.
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you and likewise
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This one is so "in the face"
    Sometimes the only way some things can be said
    Is to just say it!!!
    Which is what you did.
    I like that!!!!!!!!!
    Not only talking about the problem
    But addressing those who sit and do nothing.

    Love the way your style shined on this one
    Loving your talent!!!!!!!!


    PEACE AND LOVE
    twision
     
  9. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you I try to get it as close to the truth as possible :wink:
     
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    Woah! Lil' Sis!
    Hold-up, Let me get my
    pen and pad out!
    I need to take some
    notes!!!!!!!!
    This is hot and you spoke
    the truth all so raw!
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
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