Black Poetry : COULD THIS BE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Securenote, Nov 1, 2004.

  1. Securenote

    Securenote Member MEMBER

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    A sweet smell rushes past her nose. She turns around completely.
    She is looking for the person wearing that smell. A Moan escapes
    her lips. The moan was not of pain, but delight.

    She stayed focused on only him. His movement made her body
    shake. When he raised his body upwards, she would slowly breathe.
    She felt her air supply leaving her very lungs during her activity
    with him. She notices the sweat dripping off her forehead. He was
    responsible for the heat which caused her to boil internally.

    Wetness covered her body completely. His movements were very
    slow. She longed for his touch. He was slow to give of himself to her.
    She begged for him to touch her; she pleaded for his love making.
    His reply to her was slow.

    She held back her frustration of not being satisfiedby him. She knew
    he would come around one day soon. She thought, when he felt the
    heat of her body, his control would finally give way to her desire.

    Awake! She now remains with her eyes open wide. She reaches over
    to pull him closer to her. Yet all she pulls is her pillow with his scent
    and her sweat.


    copyrighted 2004 VR
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well now this was steamy and sweet, the thoughts that a fragrance can invoke. Welcome to Destee....Hope to hear more from you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the home u found within
    welcome from above as i bless this post some love
    happy u here to share and grow upon us as family
    very nice scribe well felt drop flow on !!!!!!!
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    Do hope you stay and enjoy the flow show love and give love as love
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    again welcome within the family ! :hiya:
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello and welcome to destee.com
    very nice flowing thanks for sharing
    looking for more to read....

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    family flow...again welcome

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  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...ok :wave:

    Welcome...Welcome...Welcome

    What an entrance...

    this was some "Fiyah" fa sho...

    Keep droppin it...

    Make yourself at home

    I'll be checkin for more of your flows!
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sis ... :huh:



    wow you caught me with this one......again






    oh lord...






    beautifull piece....






    Lovelibertylady:heart: