Black Poetry : Could It Be?

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    They Romanticize and fantasize
    But when I finally look into
    his eyes, to my surprise...

    I see infinite passion and
    sunshine to my winter beaten soul.
    When I look at him.
    My senses lose all control.
    The scent of him, the taste
    of Him, the feel of him.

    Passion races through my
    body , like a ambulance
    on a rescue mission.

    I fantasize and visualize
    making love in every position.

    His words like the kiss on snow
    white's lips awaken me.

    Warm emotions course through
    me excitement at every word he
    speaks. Anxiety that we may never
    meet.

    I wait and wonder, sit and ponder,
    passion high and strong emotions heartfelt
    devotion...

    Could it be?
    That love is once again in motion.
    I pray daily for an answer.
    And daily my response is the
    same....WAIT!

    COULD IT BE?
    Over the miles and years, or lifetimes...
    Another time you have crept into my soul, my sex
    my mind.
    Erasing all time before and making only the "Present",
    a gift you give me for believing.

    Awakened my passions and literally makes me want
    to lose control...
    Could it be?
    Is the Mantra of my soul...."If Love is the answer , Let it be"!
    FOR ISAD bjs(C)
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin' the flow of this piece, dear poetess. keep on scribin', as i continue to watch.


    ~~~chaptersoflove~~~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it could be !

    the bite of cupid arrow
    the love sparrow
    the eyes that tantlize
    mesmerize and hypnotize
    by love's sweet gift

    it could be
    no need to wait and see
    just come to me....!
    :heart: