Quiet Poetry Lounge : Could I ???

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Beautiful_by_me, May 29, 2004.

  1. Beautiful_by_me

    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ©"Could I"



    Could I pretend that his words didn't meet me in a kind place?

    Could I escape the feelings received by my own heart as his name became clear to me...?

    Could I allow myself to dance with simple thoughts of pleasure that only his words could give?

    Could I respond to his sensuality and force his sexuality to come forth with “quite" boldness?

    Could I ???

    Could I continue to write about unknown passions between pen and paper, without, giving in to the SOURCE...?

    Could I...send flawless flirts to speak to his intellect, that would cause him to blush from miles away????

    Could I force unknown pleasures to dance upon his every thought, his every dream, his EVERY DAYDREAM that could illuminate the darkest place, strengthen the weakest place and soften the hardest place of his every being????


    COULD I?




    Written By Tia Williams
    (4/19/04)
     
  2. PurpleMoons

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    :wave: HaaaaaaaaaaaaaY Beautiful_by_me! :wave:



    ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~

    Thanks for joining us and sharing this beautiful flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com quiet flowz
    welcome to the family of love & peace
    this was well done
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You probably could have, but it wouldn't have been easy. Another really nice vibe from you.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

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    :wave:
    welcome
    to destee.com
    nice scribe
    thanks for sharing
     
  6. queentswana

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    Very nice piece and welcome to the house of love.
     
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    Dropping verbiage like this...

    I'm inclined to say that you COULD...oh yes you COULD...

    This was smooth...

    Scribe on...Poet!
     
  8. Beautiful_by_me

    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you

    For caring enough to respond.... :grouphug:


     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow
    yes so elegant your words in the flow
    it seem you could :) for sure
    flow on
    enjoying your poems
    Peace~N~BlueWater:heart:
     
  10. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sis,

    I love your stuff. Keep flowing...