Black Poetry : Could I Be The Brotha...

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let me take hold of your daytime
    dreams and turn them into
    rhapsodies of nighttime fantasies
    Harmoniously relaxing your adult
    mind and slowly regressing you into
    a childlike state to know true love

    My innocence wraps around yours and
    plays a game of 1-2-3 Redlight; all too
    aware that a redlight hinders me not

    Hopes and imaginings of a love so pure
    One that even I cannot comprehend
    But I wish to bestow so much upon you

    A breeze, potent as a summertime bouquet
    of aromatic wildflowers, captures my yearning
    to be the proverbial “one” for you

    Only if you’ll have me and want me like no other
    will I seduce your hunger and quench your need
    Pleasuring your mind with love’s liquid remedy

    Feel my burning heart as its’ fires scorch
    your soul; reminding you that my love for
    you is heated passion waiting to be unleashed

    I am who I am because my innerself compels me
    to feel for you from a higher plateau; untouched
    by any other who seeks to connect with your essence

    So I simply ask…

    Could I be the brotha to make your love fantasy a reality?
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ ~

    You just might be that ONE
    I've desired -
    I'm definitely calling out to you!!
    Brotha ...
    Brotha on the freedom side of this century do you ever stop and wonder what you are made of?
    You are HOPE sounding clear as xylophone tones-
    Walking hell's edge and brushing heaven's curtains
    Some days walking like sunshine & loose change without a dime in your pocket~
    dancing eyes strong love spirit free chest full listen close;
    YOU are a tan dance on life's fingertips

    Young one. rubbing your inside plans together
    Wandering brotha. you are someone's whispered prayer fragrant as sandalwood...maybe he was a healing man spinning freedom dreams...may a son...YOU with barefoot courage in unfettered stride unfettered grace strolling down future's sidewalk in this silver city-
    Your feet could tell stories~ sometimes alone. sometimes lonely. Navigating the boundaries and shadows hugging the walls of your DNA...Hungry authority challenging your organic smile...stuttering handclaps to the rhythm of your obstacles as regular as red lights....A pailful of questions spiraling anger wrinkling the inside of your chest
    Hurt eyes strong love chest free remember
    Your name is someone's treasured whisper somewhere, your name is someone's treasured whisper...

    Brotha you smile I hear a piano solo. Congas in my heart. Cubana funk on this street. neon red & orange. beats and slides. Young man. Old child. You are a jazz riff a bronze groove weaving faith into your future...defining your own self, designing your own music...a still knowing in your natural elegance~ knit yourself next to me...velvet in your language, soprano in your touch, bass in your kiss -notes fly where we come together...a hymn on electric air. A Sunday. Shiny side up. Go on in your particular shade of song. Go on.

    Shining trumpet sounding out gold melodies echoing old gazes out freedom's window. You one in a chorus of generations shaping this country with strong eyes dancing love spirits chest free - Treasured whispers on bare oak floors. Loved one. Stepchild. Man. Youth. Walking this now time of hell's edge and heaven's curtains....YOU. Strong shoes. Suede sway. Easy as jeans in your incensed embrace. Soothe my moody ride of life... Do you ever stop and wonder what you are made of? Nappy dreams hovering the root of your scalp, brotha you are celestial material handlin' your cloth~

    ....your name is someone's treasured whisper somewhere.
     
  3. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhhhh N2!!!!

    Muuuuaaaah!!!!

    N2, you are lovely!!!! ;)

    L&R
    GQ
     
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    Some old me... :laugh:

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    GQ

    I've tried to tell you time and time again...but you refused to pay attention...now I revert back to the beginning when I said...

    wow! wow!

    can you translate this language

    NICE PEACE D!!

    :toast:
     
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    hey big-head!!... rememba this???

    You… are sweetly taking hold
    of my daytime… nyghttyme…
    for All tyme fantasies & dreams
    & I… am amorously wondering—
    Could you be the brotha…

    You… are spiritually & emotionally
    wrapping yourself around my
    conscious mind…
    & I’m… allowing myself the rare
    opportunity to experience—
    Love True…
    So, when I look at you… Into you
    & You see into me… my heart
    emphatically shouts—
    Yessss! The brotha you be…

    The brotha making my fantasy reality
    The brotha truly seeing me
    The brotha controlling my souls sanity—
    softly setting me free… wholly loving me…
    gently… touching my destiny…

    Simply stated… no one can debate it
    fate… has lovingly made me see—
    You are indeed the brotha for me

    © SunshyneOrygynals 2001, all rights reserved
     
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    my brutha u r the one indeed now go forth and do ya will
     
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