Black Poetry : could be worse

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  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    resting in the wake of internal deadzones
    battle grounds remnant rounds resounding
    echoes of relentless poundings
    and the mind is time
    and I reach for better climes
    and let the music douse me drown me
    catch me up in the cool currents
    and cast me far away from my internal
    circumstantial surroundings
    looking to be lost
    if only in the soft moment of
    a sigh and the rise of light
    warm and distant
    and let the luminance cascade
    across the creation of the moment
    settle for this wisp of synthetic
    inspiration in the abscence
    of pure desire
    and the distant fires that burn
    in the distance like a warm and rising light
    cascading to banish the frayed shadows
    of a momentarily misplaced universe...
    yeah... It could be worse...

    05/03/Michael
     
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    it sure could be...very nice very nice!
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx T!
    Peace to ya!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed i feel ya here
    it could be worse !
    tyteeeeeeeeeeee flow
     
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    Thanx Rich!
    Peace to ya!
     
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    A verbal assault of great magnitude!
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx 1poet! Though I hope this didn't come off like an attack.
    it was in fact the react to being attacked for a long drawn out time. Just making space to take a breather.
    Peace to ya!

    Thanx Cindy! lol it can ALWAYS be worse. I often have had to tell myself this when things got impossibly out of control crazy. It does give balance to perspective. You keep your head up, Poet!
    There is always something to be greatful for.
     
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