Black Poetry : Cosmic Uterus (unfinished version)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    360 degrees atoms revolve inside me
    as I revolve around in this cosmic uterus
    trapped in the womb of elements that
    comprise me.....heartbeat getting
    down with the rhythm of nova pulses
    and my mind flows....Cosmic uterus
    existing among sagittarius, orion,
    and libra kicking it in the galaxy
    of blakholes and travelling on light
    beams from the sun....I am the one
    anointed king of Sirius pointing things
    out to Lagrange before mass transfer
    and comets hold hands to serve
    as my dance floor...so "Rock, Rock,
    to the Planet Rock don't stop
    ..."
    and Afrika is where I'll be when my
    physical leaves this Cosmic Uterus
    thats what the spirits told me....so I can
    see me in another form..maybe landing
    on the Serengeti during a shooting star
    storm...and chill with the lions and run
    with the gazelles until then I exist
    in this cosmic Uterus.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    VERY WELL SAID

    I LOVE HOW U PAINTED THIS PICTURE
    IT BRINGS OUT EMOTIONAL FEELINGS
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm gonna have to...

    marinate all up in dis heah prose ... you know I've got a come back for this -- just let me feel my way before I lay down with the flow....


    Be Comin' 4 the SOUL N U ~

    One Luv
    Two :heart:'s
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My RoYaL BLaK-NeSs....


    ...& you say this is the "unfinished" version???!

    well... it seems pretty complete to me!!...
    Complete-ly Tyght that is!!
    (but dats just my opinion)... :)

    OneLuv.
    Ga~
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm Cummin' 4 Ya' (pardon the pun)

    As the halo bulges around
    your milky way
    it populates my cosmic uter(us)
    and sends
    shooting stars to explore
    internal or(i)gins within
    lighting a clear pathway
    N2 my Soul
    Mr. Sagittarius in between
    toasted almond thighs
    balancing the Libra in me
    on my own set of scales
    and I
    release warm tidal forces
    of escaped matter
    to spit-shine your skin

    one
    uuuuuuuhh mmmmm
    after
    uuuuuuuhh mmmmm
    the other

    There's an elliptical intimacy
    reaching your colossal galaxy
    of blak holes
    and gravity emits
    fantasies that I visualize
    in stellar brightness
    through even the
    darkest - density
    Search no further for
    ambiguity inside the
    space of another unknown
    A S T R O N O M I C A L
    realm
    -- your solar sensitive instrument
    leaves remnants along
    my internal walls
    in rose petal red
    to mark the dampness
    of this territory
    in which
    you now reside
    unlike that of the
    Serengeti whose
    sands are
    hot and dry ~
     
  6. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$, N2, GA

    thanks ya'll for the replies. N2 that follow up was like dizzzzzam! GA, wait for the finished cut.

    blak
    verb
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    is there talent here

    or what nice piece dun

    DSSNY
     
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