Black Poetry : Cosmic Groove

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Apr 2, 2004.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i would walk the fertile grounds
    in search of his face...
    to plant kisses on his mental...
    (i used to love the way his lips tasted)

    i would carress his face and speak scripture
    into his ear...
    (his love was better than wine)

    i let my feet play in the Nile...
    while he lifted me up to
    flirt with the sun...
    (he would tickle my toes)

    we rolled on the grass
    Higher Beings made love there
    centuries ago...
    (i would dream u sometymes, while the moon watches guard)

    fresh and lush
    i felt comfortable lying on your stomach
    i would count the ribs and try to figure out
    which one I came out of before the Fall...
    (so was it this rib or this rib?)

    laughter was my name...


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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome flowin lil sis
     
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    Story, I love the creative way you flowed with this.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yalll...
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    indeed u create a crafty master piece every time
    ya pen is mos def awesome keep flowing lil sis...
     
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    WOW...NICE.

    skin
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beauty is your name sweetie, cuz it's all in and through what you do

    Real
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks skin
    thanks twofish *blush*
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    Cosmic Groove? Man I'm diggin this like whoa!
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks allure...gots love for u...
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