Black Poetry : Corner

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Apr 3, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    u cornered me
    and asked me why
    i care for you
    tell you how
    i flowed with answers
    you denied
    then felt the tears
    form in my eyes.
    u said it is impossible
    to explain, and all
    my efforts were in vain.
    in thought i tried
    to gather words
    everything i said
    was nothing u heard
    and surely as the days
    go by i'll think of you
    and wonder why
    u couldn't just let it be
    i care for you
    you care for me..
     
  2. Dee

    Dee Active Member MEMBER

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    I love your work!!!! And I can definitely relate!
     
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    I too can relate, much felt by me, nicely written!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling dis deep within ......sadly sad
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I AGREE WITH CINDY...THIS IS SAD AND SOOOO FAMILIAR....
     
  6. Destee

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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaaaaay MORE :wave:

    Now you know you gotta read this on the mic !!! Does DJ RBG know you write poetry too ??!!! Ohhhhhhhh ... you've been holding out on us ... c'mon now MORE ... we should be able to hear this peace LIVE !!! ... www.************ ...

    Great Work!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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