Black Poetry : Copy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, May 13, 2019.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It was yesterday.
    She opened the door and I was struck
    I took her all in
    Fraction, minute, total
    Clear snap
    Head to toe
    She was a doll.
    So no hesitation
    I told her it was good to see her again
    I was totally taken
    She smiled
    So no I had never met her before
    But that first encounter radiated.
     
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    I like the feel of this piece, Brother Poet HODEE.

    (smile)
     
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