Quiet Poetry Lounge : Cool Nights/Warm Days

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cherryblossom, Apr 1, 2009.

  1. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Do you adore cool nights
    When frost settles on dew-dampened grass
    And icicles hang outside the window's chilled glass?

    Mmmm.
    'Cause that's when I do most enjoy a coy snuggle
    And a teasing tickle
    From strong, firm hands that make my skin PRICKLE
    With MOIST anticipation
    And RSVP invitation
    Waiting for HIS skillful glovin', rubbin,' and FULL spoon-lovin' ATTENTION
    Oh, and don't let me forget to mention
    That I can't help but reciprocate
    As my tongue and lips begin to skip and skate
    All OVER his body as his did mine
    Just feverishly drunk on each other's intoxicating wine
    Then, while still riding our own tidal crest and wave
    I let him know for him ALL my lovin's saved and ONLY for him do I misbehave
    As he DIVES into my warm, engulfing broth
    And we sweat, and sway until his passion spills out his milky, creamy froth
    DEEP into my niches and crannies
    Oh, the sensation is mind-blowing and absolutely uncanny!

    Do you enjoy warm days
    When it's just too hot outside to play
    And, so, instead choose to stay indoors and lay
    Under cool breezes from a whirling fan
    Or let the AC blow, blast and ban
    The earth's heat from sneaking in?

    'Cause that's when I do most appreciate the boudoir's den
    And would prefer raising our temperatures from within
    As he performs amazing tricks w/a cube of ice
    And I shiver and tingle from his attentions
    But later on, he'll pay the same priceā€¦

    I'll nip and trail wet kisses from head to toe
    All the while, cooling along the way as I lick and BLOW
    His MIND
    As his senses reel and wind
    The controls are totally in my capable grasp
    As I rock & ride and he begins to GASP
    Out his breath-taking surrender
    To me IN ALL MY marvelous SPLENDOR!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U have change the way i see night and day
    wit rayz of sensual extreme and cool mist of
    comforting in da depth of each moment .

    This was one smooth yet hot flow dat got da mind spinning in circles
    as i envision da day and night play.

    U took me there .....whewwwwww!!!!
     
  3. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Thank you very much, Rich!

    Yeah, I was feeling kinda frisky with that one! *wink*
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your word choice allowed the reader to almost feel the temperature ranges within. Flow on poetess, much enjoyed.
     
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