Black Poetry : Cool Breeze

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cool Breeze
    A thatgirl74 and kyfab collab.

    kyfab a friend not a part of Destee but needed to get her props.

    He strolled in the room smooth and easy
    Gear tight and smile just right
    Floated by eyes of girls who wanted
    To be on his arm in his car
    Shoot just be.
    He was a sharp as a tack an old man
    Said sitting at the bar sipping on
    His yack.
    Gurl what you wouldn’t do to glide across
    The room with this manly stud.
    Oh yeah he had game he could out
    Play any playa.
    The other brothas sitting and hating
    Wondering why he had to roll in this
    Spot at this time. Cause the girls
    They were macking all night with drinks
    And words of forever and all the pleasure
    Were macked right out their panties when
    He rolled on the scene.
    cool breeze
    Yea he strolled in the room smooth and easy
    having the ladies drip with want and need
    need to be the THAT woman on his arm
    his car, and his bed
    Man he is smooth, sharp too, Casanova
    at its finest,slicker than slick
    make the heart beat ten thousands times its speed
    Brothas all around filled with hatred for this Brotha
    done messed up their groove
    All HE has to do is speak and
    THEY will listen follow every command


    Oh yeah cool and smooth too hot to handle.
    But under that sullen veneer is the heart of
    a mouse. Oh he stands tall as a Giant but he
    has fears beyond anyone's imagination. fear
    of the closeness yearned by the others. fear
    of that intimate time the sweet caress and the
    kiss of the sweet sweet thang.
    Who could imagine that his quiet aloofness
    was not a part of his persona but a handicap
    that he had yet learned to conquer.

    Conguered he shall yet mighty he is not
    smooth playboy and mammas boy too
    all the right steps and all the right speech
    yet it couldnt get him wher he wanted to be
    The fear of commitment, love and respect
    holds him prisoner in his own heart
    Memories past ,present and future
    transend the moment in time when
    he can can or will feel the abcense of a loving hand, caress
    Remeber Lifes lesson...Respect is giving to those who earn it
    Oh yeah.....Cool breeze, he strolled in the room
    smooth and easy
    but do u see what I see?
     
  2. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    wow...yall put this one together..this is so tight...I love the contrast between the first and second parts...lessons to be learned here in this piece...excellent drop.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    This was awesome and ya right ya friend need to join us
    to get her props due poeticly , y'all laid this one out fo real.
     
  4. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank Ya $$R$$ YeahI think kyfab would do good I invted her so we'll see thank you for all the love you always show.

    abstract thanks for the feedback glad you enjoyed the flo.

    smooches!!!
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DANG MY 2 SISTahz I WAS REALLY FEELIN DIS
    dis drop remineded me of me, the way i luk at brathaz
    and how i can read dem and tell if dey r ready 4 a commitiment
    dis was on the reals
    so both o yall flo on wit truths and of realz



    blackluv and bp
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    likewise sista likewise
     
  7. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Ghetto yeah there is alwaya a glimmer of reality in a fictious charaacter. lol
     
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