Black Poetry : Convince Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Destee, Jan 24, 2001.

  1. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    convince my heart that this is not real
    tell it to slow back down and chill

    convince my mind that we've not connected
    that some vibes have been misdirected

    convince my body that it doesn't feel
    the passion and yearning that you instill

    convince my eyes that they can't see
    a life together, just you and me

    convince my soul that it's not at peace
    because of your love that does not cease

    convince my strength that it isn't stronger
    shadowed by yours that it sits under

    tell me something, make me know
    that i must let these feelings go
    that i'm way off track, in left field
    all by myself and with no shield
    from the pain that's sure to come
    if you convince me of any one
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nah Uhh...you've just convinced me that your work is smooth!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  3. 8th wonder

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    That was tight!!!! Flow on PLEASE!!
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queen Destee....

    get your flow on then sis!! i lovedid it!!
    especially this part:

    i can dig it!! fa sho!!

    Peace&Love...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    O~my destee
    all i can say !
     
  6. PoeticMaster

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    convincing

    how u r beauty
    how u r sweet
    how u r love
    how u r joy
    convincing
    yo heart is gold
    the soul is whole
    convincing the mind
    is within mines
    thats all i can convince!
    love ya flow D...........
     
  7. Destee

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    GQ ... so sweet of you :wink:

    Sunshyne, 8th Wonder and HoneyLuv, thank you Ladies!

    PoeticMaster ... be careful now, i fall easy :wink:

    yall got me smiling ... thanks

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  8. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    quite nyce, destee. uhhmmm, is he convinced?
     
  9. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you don't have to convince me

    that you're good

    liking your work
     
  10. Bishop

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    is there any convincing still needed?...Listen to the heart and you will know.;)
     
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