Black Poetry : Conversations

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by OmoObatala, Dec 12, 2003.

  1. OmoObatala

    OmoObatala Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'se be a poet.
    Getting attention is my
    Inscription on life

    Cases become my looking glass
    Words my soup mix
    Thoughts my home address
    Reverence my pager number

    Charm is charlottes web of
    Tasty treats

    I don't like poker cause I
    Can’t seem to find my poker face
    I lost it when I was 3 and was told tell
    The truth: girlchild

    My answer to that question you presented
    Counselor is in between that cat in the hat
    And the lines of this response

    Did you know E=mc squared?
    Or was it just Orin’s belt that got you lost
    Trying to find your way to Hailey’s comet…

    I can help you find you way back
    Home if you have bread
    Crumbs in your pocket....

    Jack and Jill fell down that hill
    Maybe I want to repair
    The process so they don’t
    Fall down the hill again

    Or maybe I am just simply nice,
    Sweet and all the things my mother
    Told me to be
    Like cherry pie in the window,
    Or nut ******** dancing
    Rain dances in a cup of tang
    Kool Aid smiles on homeless men
    Nickel-bockers- knee on my tip tap toe...

    You decided the conclusion
    You knew it when you started the conversation
    This is all irrelevant….
    Just a game of cat and mouse


    game set match point love to 14
     
  2. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *whew* my, my, my, this is too tyte for words, i loved it....a masterpiece......
    :heart:
    -story :coffee:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaa tyte write yes indeed
    flow on let it pop
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *Applause**Applause**Applause**Applause*

    Love the originality...relevant or not! :toast:
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your scribe is one of a kind...please keep writing!
     
  6. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YO!! Sista EX...where have ya been cause ya sho nuff been missed...THIS has been missed
    [email protected] my sista I am SO glad to read you again! :)
     
  7. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a great piece
    the scribe you compose
    very nice
    wonderful
    Peace
     
  8. icandi

    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love this poem nice job
     
  9. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonderful indeed.......this was a tyte drop
     
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