Black Poetry : conversations

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Jul 10, 2003.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we used to talk
    with conversations
    burned into my cortex,
    vortex to
    another tyme
    and another world
    privately, admiting
    majic through words
    that drip
    S.ugah
    H.oney
    I.ced
    T.ea

    throughly,deeply,
    sweetly
    of past lives when
    i was one with the universe
    and u were the spirit of
    the stars, reminisce

    we talk of emotional scars
    that cut deep into the pentacle
    of that,that is us
    of our loved ones and trust,

    of Adam and Eve
    and birth from the
    dust

    we talk fantasies
    that go past the
    borders of realities
    of this world.

    conversations that form
    constellations and storms
    of mournings alone.

    the conversations
    shared with
    u are
    sacred, sealed
    in stone.





    dis is from ya deep poetic GODDESS, hope u like the scribe, enjoy
     
  2. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this. Felt to the core!
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo thank u, appreciate u dropin through, Alizentang
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed this was well felt down to da bone
     
  5. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang, thanx yall i didnt expect to get responds so quick!!
    well glad yall liked it, fasho

    peace
    -story
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tyte...:toast:
     
  7. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh....t...thanx for stoppin by appreciate i
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You have caught my attention...I need more of your flava.......
     
  9. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes and please believe that this is not the last u will see of the poetic GODDESS.

    my scribes bless eyes brutah, i u want more u got it!
     
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