Black Poetry : Conversation

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, May 7, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 26, 2003
    Messages:
    1,172
    Likes Received:
    7
    Occupation:
    Living
    Location:
    Home is where the heart is, but my heart isn't her
    Ratings:
    +7
    + him
    * me

    * Hello? I've been callin all day. Where u been?
    + Ive been busy workin, i didn't get off til ten
    * Well its 1 now, so where have u been til then?
    + I came home and slept, then went to help a friend

    * Do u expect me to believe that?
    + I have no reason to lie, why u all on my back?
    * You weren't with ur friends, i know for a fact
    + Here we go again, then tell me where was i at?

    * Dont try to change it up on me, just answer the question
    + I already told u, there shouldn't even be a question
    * Who is she? Whats her name?
    + What? U sound crazy, stop stressin'

    * Just tell me the truth, I won't get mad
    + There is no one and u would get mad
    * I'd rather u tell me, than have me find out and things get bad
    + Why cant u just accept that I'm a good man?

    * Good men have the tendacy to slip
    + I'm not the type to hit it and dip
    * Who is she? Stop tryin to switch ((((yellin)))
    + Man... I dont have to sit here and take this sh** ((((yellin)))

    * Okay, well who's panties are these? And Tamika has hit u up a few times
    + Those are urs, Tamika is just a friend of mine
    * Im not 3! I dont even like that color and their not my size
    + My sister was here last weekend, maybe she left them behind

    * See, Ive played this game too many times, u aint sh**
    + Baby listen, Im tellin u the truth, cant we just 4get it
    * Is fool written on my face? ur not sorry u did it, ur sorry u slipped
    + (((stutterin))) U r the only one 4 me, just u, thats it

    * I wasnt the only one for u, when u were out in the streets
    + I was with my boy, I dont have no time for them hoez n freaks
    * See, u must think Im dumb cuz i called ur boy, he hasnt seen u in a week
    + (((stutterin)) ... um... why u checkin on me?

    * U aint no good, im gone, i knew u werent worthy of my trust
    + Wait, baby Im sorry, it only happened once
    * If u really love me then once is good enuf
    + Lets talk about this, ur my number 1, she dont mean much

    * Well she did that night, its been nice, but im out
    + Im sorry, just hear me out
    * Nope, i see what ur all about
    + I doubt-

    * Bye (((click)))
    + ****, why?

    To be continued...
     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Apr 22, 2003
    Messages:
    9,146
    Likes Received:
    1,097
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +1,102
    cute and original. loved it
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    crazy thing to do
    who fooling who !???

    like dis one here pt.#2 the convo
     
  4. Poetic Justice

    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 2, 2003
    Messages:
    204
    Likes Received:
    3
    Occupation:
    Analyst
    Location:
    detroit
    Ratings:
    +3
    I am waiting for 2 to be released, very good,had me all in.
     
  5. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 10, 2003
    Messages:
    832
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    High School Teacher
    Location:
    Atlanta
    Ratings:
    +2
    dayum poet I like I like pt.2 when u ready but bring it in a hurry that didn't make sense huh? lol nice flow peace and blessins gurl
     
  6. cattalina

    cattalina Active Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 7, 2003
    Messages:
    33
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    I really liked this piece, I was really into it. For me I was just so trusting...I always envy stories of girls who were or are perceptive. I got played twice before realizing the fool had to go!

    Keep on flowin' you are truly blessed with an awesome gift.
     
  7. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 9, 2003
    Messages:
    1,182
    Likes Received:
    13
    Occupation:
    LAW ENFORCEMENT SOMETHING!?!
    Location:
    CHICAGO, ILL-NOIZE (EVANSTON)
    Ratings:
    +13
    I like this one too...it was so original and it's to be continued. I'll be waitin'.
     
  8. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 26, 2003
    Messages:
    1,172
    Likes Received:
    7
    Occupation:
    Living
    Location:
    Home is where the heart is, but my heart isn't her
    Ratings:
    +7
    thank you, im workin on it right now, but im going out of town this weekend, so monday it will be out for yall to read. much luv...
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 16, 2003
    Messages:
    2,781
    Likes Received:
    15
    Occupation:
    College Student, Bookstore Clerk
    Location:
    ...down south...
    Ratings:
    +16
    this is tyte...i like the subject and the flow.....love it!
     
Loading...