Black Poetry : Conversation With My Muse

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  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ....ramblings from the hope chest...

    there is magic
    in the mystery

    that
    "Je ne sais quoi"
    kinda quality....

    that touch of
    mellow madness
    deepening
    ever widening
    the curiosity

    the rhythms of
    shadowy body
    movements,
    illusive,

    they allure
    & seduce

    constantly

    like being just
    a little bit
    bare....

    accessible,
    palpable,

    edible
    palatible...

    it is, and
    yet
    it's not
    quite there...

    there is
    this sweet
    agony bound up
    in
    anticipation

    in un/expected
    surprises
    & dizzy
    palpitations

    we crave
    situations
    that make us
    salivate...

    we salivate
    over situations
    we crave

    ripe and ready
    for the plucking

    we grope
    in the half/light
    to achieve
    that wet explosion
    from the
    warm/tight
    place
    where life
    itself throbs
    & pulsates

    there's mystery
    in the magic

    when love
    is loosed
    from inside
    the box

    & allowed to
    run amuck

    permitted to
    liberate
    those who
    wanna give a F_k

    love...let outside
    Pandora's
    proverbial
    hellish hole
    to finally
    demonstrate

    love has
    a higher
    calling

    to
    edify &
    create!


    Alyce (c) 2002

    From "The Woman In My Attic"...
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms. A

    Is the lady taking the hope chest to the attic or is she in the attic sorting through the hope chest.... I love your style





    One
     
  3. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    teach me

    what you know, Ms. A. I'm reading.

    BRB
     
  4. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms. A...

    What can I 'say'
    about Ms. A, and
    her wonderful
    way with words?
    I could read Ms. A
    poems all the day
    long (ya know I could)...:D

    I love it (ya know I do)...
     
  5. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is what you be talking bout

    with him? :D

    Tell us more!!!

    Deep and profound per usual, Ms. A.

    T
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! Alyce

    the lady who know da lady in da attic
    flow in wisdom to teach us knowledge
    lovin dis piece..........bout speachless!:heart: :kiss:
     
  7. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce,

    Your work is like dessert. Can't wait to get to it and when you do, how sweet it is. :)

    Madd Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  8. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If this is rambling...

    then I hate to see when you're making sense!
    What can I say, your talent is amazing!:)
     
  9. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    much love and humble thanks

    Poets.

    The woman in my attic is someone I hope to be....one day. I see her up there sending messages down from that overcrowded hope chest... hoping I'll get wise...

    Thank you again for feeling her vibes. :heart:

    a
     
  10. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce.


    Whoa!!....

    this is magnificent.

    (i'm bowing again!... & don't even try to stop me!)

    :heart:
    SunShyne~
     
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