Black Poetry : Conversation(part III)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, May 12, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    = him
    + me

    (phone is ringin)
    + Hello?
    = hey, its me, can we talk? can we meet somewhere, if so?
    + yeah, not tonight tho
    = okay can i come over tomorrow?
    + thats fine, but right now i got to go
    = okay g'night...

    next day...
    (knocking)
    + Im comin, hold on. hey whats up?
    = Nothin much
    + u just comin from work or what?
    = yeah, workin these long hours can be tough

    + yeah i feel you. im so tired right now
    = oh okay... (gets quiet for a quick second) baby i miss havin u around.
    + then why did u give me a reason to bounce?
    = i dont know, i wasnt thinkin. since u left i have been down.

    + i dont know anymore, i cant even believe u
    = ive apologized, i cant take back the hands of time, what more can i do?
    + i don't know, i just want the truth
    = the truth is i am deeply in love with you

    (she just sits there, lookin at him)
    = I promise I will never hurt u again, I only want u in my life
    + Is that right? (smiles)
    = yes.(smiles) U can trace my calls, follow me, do whateva u like
    + dont tempt me, cuz i just might

    = im serious, i will do anything to prove my love and my dedication
    + okay remember that, when i ask u 4 sumthin, i dont want no hesitation
    = (smiles) okay but if my games r on, u gotta tape 'em
    + deal. now give me a kiss and an embracin

    = i really dont know what id do, if i lost u
    + now u learned a lesson, playin games can cost u
    = yea, u know from day 1 all i wanted was u
    + sure did, i got that vibe from the moment i saw u

    = nobody has ever gotten me to this level
    + yeah i myself never settled
    = you came into my life and made a change 4 the better
    + and u stuck by me thru the good and bad weather

    = i love you and i need u, i want to be with u until they burry me
    + thats kind of like eternity(smiles)
    = eaxactly(smiles) so... what im sayin is...(bends on one knee)
    Will you marry me?

    (shocked, happy, teary-eyed,all of the above)
    + yes, yes, yes...
     
  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwwwww gurl that was more than beautiful very very very nice flow peace and blessins gurl keep flowin
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a beautiful ending to a convo
    this was awesome
     
  4. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yay a good endin, i wasnt expectin that....keep writin much love :)
     
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