Black Poetry : Conversation of Lovers

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  1. FattnBeautiful

    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Come away with me my secret love
    Come away with me to our secret fantasy
    Take my hand. I'll lead you there
    Shh your secrets are safe with me

    My secret love
    I crave to be in that secret fantasy
    But I am scared to let go
    and blindly take your hand
    My secrets I am hesitant to share

    Baby it's okay
    Close your eyes
    Don't be afraid
    For I am your escape
    Leave your worries behind
    please don't be hesitant

    You make it sound so easy
    to just run away

    Baby believe me it's okay

    Aren't you worried?
    Do you have any care?

    Baby with you I have no fear
    I have no worries
    And yes I care
    I care for you

    I care for you too
    and I want to escape with you
    But how do I forget?
    How do I not be hesitant?

    Its not easy
    I know, I see
    But believe me my love
    When I take you on this fantasy
    You also will see you should leave with me

    I want to believe my love
    and fly in your arms
    I want to see
    Should I go on this fantasy

    Then Baby lets go
    Fly in my arms
    Let me carry you away
    I promise I won't let anything happen to you on the way
    Just trust in me you will see
    and Baby remember your secrets are safe with me

    I will take your hand
    I will close my eyes
    I want you so bad
    I will fly in your arms
    Carry me away
    All my secrets I will tell
    Take me away to our secret fantasy
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wanting to take that trek, but being afraid to trust, afraid of that vulnerability. I smiled while reading the convincing dialogue, and the final, yes, I feel I'm safe, ending. Much enjoyed.
     
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    Hi Sister FattnBeautiful
    Oh my gosh..this is wonderful.
    *smiling* I could feel the whisper in this flow
    You brought me into your poem.
    I enjoyed the plan adventure. It just had me
    smiling even more as well. Nice read

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    Trust is a Wonderful and very powerful posession for two people.....I really Liked your journey Sister FattnBeautiful
    Beautiful Indeed.....
    Continue My Sister
     
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    Thank you all for your wonderful comments.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what two can share secretly ......wow
     
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    Thank you Rich.
     
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    I know what if you dont get out of my head GURLLLLLL

    This is so awesome. I love it. IT feels so good. And it feels like something I been thinking.
     
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    FattnBeautiful:
    Coversations of secrets, trusting
    another...thoughts deeply expressed
    Its all good when its right.
    Enjoyed this read.




    Much Luv
     
  10. BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE

    BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE Nefertum Husia Shayheh MEMBER

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    (Phone Conversation)

    Feather: when i come down dry don't forget when we need to get wetted slowly from the tip and surface don't sex me tight keep uncut.
    Ink: i'm always wet rippling when the universe in motion touch me unique founded on everywhere we forever in this twisted and looped.
    Feather: when i come down lighter i takes my time switching position gently to the left then falling right it's like love suspended.
    Ink: i'm darker than indigo the hues around you the nile river formless where pakhet lives i go further i go wherever we meet.
    Feather: how many lines i have to be still in you warm and true?
    Ink: how many times can you dip before you break?
    Feather: depending on how many times i deep dive dripping forever moist ready to impress onto life.
    Ink: without me you wouldn't exist.
    Feather: without me you wouldn't exist.
    Ink: so when you coming down??
    Feather: maybe whenever i gain some weight.
    Ink: so i'm not enough or too much or what you mean???
    Feather: i'm just saying...it's about me nothing personal.
    Ink: okay so you don't want to write of me or with me or even--
    Feather: even what??
    Ink: you know...
    Feather: no i don't...
    Ink: why you don't??
    Feather: cause i'm not a mind reader.
    Ink: see why you ain't there like not there?
    Feather: what??? i'm always there what you talking about??
    Ink: you getting an attitude or what? you got something to say?? be a lover.
    Feather: oh you gotta go there every time trying to pull me down--
    Ink: what?? pull you down?? whatever i'm trying to hook-up with you but you missing the point--
    Feather: oh my head in the skies floating on by cause up here it's real...oh it's real when i come down with it though i won't tell you.
    Ink: what you mean about all of that...?? (small laughter)
    Feather: i mean i gotta do me to uplift myself and need no proving to nobody not even you though i love you.
    Ink: fore real??? wait a minute what you say??? you thought--
    Feather: i said you beautiful in the most ultimate refreshingly way knowing it is a lie though i gave you my best as you are beautiful but-
    Ink: but what???
    Feather: just saying i don't need to say you beautiful all the time and all when the hearts beat regardless, am i the right love for us?
    Ink: i mean...wow...where did all of this come from??!?! gosh why it's gotta be like this?? i need a real--
    Feather: what??? real what or who and why when and how?? don't worry you gon' leave me regardless.
    Ink: ok well since it's like that and you talking like it's over--
    Feather: nah i didn't say it like that i was just expressing myself--
    Ink: so what you saying??
    Feather: nothing i guess. imma stay quiet.
    Ink: i didn't say all that and why you gotta be so low?
    Feather: i be darn if i do and be darn if don't...i need peace of mind
    Ink: wow so i'm not a piece of mind or peace? you okay???

    end of part one.
     
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