Black Poetry : Control (my return)

[shUt-Yo-M0uf]

control
you captivated my soul
complete control
my mind you've stole
mind control
now you have me as a whole

i find myself saying yes
when i know "no" is best
i catch myself spelling out your name
completely blind to this mind game
i watch you manipulate
but still im drawn to your bait
hearing your sweets going through my ear
grasping on to every little syllable that i hear

control
now it is you that i extol
complete control
you've got me speaking in espanol
mind control
but to you im just another plain ol' nicole

usted tenga mí loco
especially when you're giving it to me slow
te quiero
but that i already show
and that you already know
too bad it will never be fa sho
its only a mind game
and im just another name

control
gave you my soul
complete control
gave you my mind to patrol
mind control
got me into this hole

somtimes i wish you didnt have control...

ive been gone a while but YAY IM BACK!!!!
reply and let me know what yall thought about it
if you want flow back...those are always fun to read.

 

[msluciousb]

Nice flow!

I know love can make you lose control.
But never lose sight that it might cost you your soul.
Magic words they whisper in your ear.
Will he be around next year.
Making you speak in a foreign tongue.
Saying come and get you some.
Janet took her's back.
And she ain't giving no slack!
Surrender can be tender...but submission is the key.
I have control of you and you have control of me...
One to another, a sister to a brother
Control and the loss of
All in the name of love!
BJS aka Msluciousb
Blessings On Ya House*
I had to get some of that! Thanks for coming on home...

 

[shUt-Yo-M0uf]

thanks that was really hot!​

 

[Bluewater]

welcome back..this is indeed a tight flow here
Peace
Blue

 

[shUt-Yo-M0uf]

. . thank you very much . .
. . for the kind words . .​