Black Poetry : Control (my return)

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  1. shUt-Yo-M0uf

    shUt-Yo-M0uf Active Member MEMBER

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    control
    you captivated my soul
    complete control
    my mind you've stole
    mind control
    now you have me as a whole

    i find myself saying yes
    when i know "no" is best
    i catch myself spelling out your name
    completely blind to this mind game
    i watch you manipulate
    but still im drawn to your bait
    hearing your sweets going through my ear
    grasping on to every little syllable that i hear

    control
    now it is you that i extol
    complete control
    you've got me speaking in espanol
    mind control
    but to you im just another plain ol' nicole

    usted tenga mí loco
    especially when you're giving it to me slow
    te quiero
    but that i already show
    and that you already know
    too bad it will never be fa sho
    its only a mind game
    and im just another name

    control
    gave you my soul
    complete control
    gave you my mind to patrol
    mind control
    got me into this hole

    somtimes i wish you didnt have control...


    ive been gone a while but YAY IM BACK!!!! :jumping:
    reply and let me know what yall thought about it
    if you want flow back...those are always fun to read. :thanks:
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow!

    I know love can make you lose control.
    But never lose sight that it might cost you your soul.
    Magic words they whisper in your ear.
    Will he be around next year.
    Making you speak in a foreign tongue.
    Saying come and get you some.
    Janet took her's back.
    And she ain't giving no slack!
    Surrender can be tender...but submission is the key.
    I have control of you and you have control of me...
    One to another, a sister to a brother
    Control and the loss of
    All in the name of love!
    BJS aka Msluciousb
    Blessings On Ya House*
    I had to get some of that! Thanks for coming on home... :jumping:
     
  3. shUt-Yo-M0uf

    shUt-Yo-M0uf Active Member MEMBER

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    thanks that was really hot!
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome back..this is indeed a tight flow here
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  5. shUt-Yo-M0uf

    shUt-Yo-M0uf Active Member MEMBER

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    . . thank you very much . .
    . . for the kind words . .
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome back....
    nice drop..
    much love..Angel
     
  7. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh yes ilike this one
    GOD BLESS :peace:
     
  8. shUt-Yo-M0uf

    shUt-Yo-M0uf Active Member MEMBER

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    thanks again guys!
     
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