Black Poetry : Contrite Hearts

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't get me started on broken hearts

    One beats inside each body part

    We cry in April,

    Like its rain...

    Showers of heartbreak MAN

    Sorrow fills my Buttercup

    Tore her up when love went bust

    Lovers leap and hope chests rust

    I love you... (but God We Trust)

    Cryin' eyes from dusk to dawn

    Swears she'll never love again

    Girl never knew what hit her ~



    Darryl Abdu Omari :hearts1:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2006
     
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    Big kisses for that one. I love it
     
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    dat's what i'm talking bout ......flow head 1poet
     
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    *sigh* You know brotha 1poet... this piece found a special place in my own heart. If I didnt love love so much... I would be afraid of it because the pain of heartbreak truly is something that shakes your entire world... *chills* I love how you always make me think :read: :)
     
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    i luved da flow here
     
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    DANG MY BRATHA THAT WAS DEEP, AND I WAS REALLY FEELING THAT ON THE REAL, SO KEEP FLOWING WIT THE TRUTHS


    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    Love to love you, baby.
     
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    love the flo 1poetsought flo on my brotha.:smooch: :welldone:
     
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