Black Poetry : Continuous Heartache

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  1. choclatefantasy

    choclatefantasy Member MEMBER

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    Fallin so hard for these boys
    With no trust in my heart
    Is slowly drivin me crazy
    And tearing my life apart

    Holdin back sniffles and tears
    That I have suppressed for so long
    Is causing me so much stress
    That soon my mind will be gone

    I need to stop letting these boys
    Constantly beat up on my heart
    Consistently hurting my feelings
    As I cry silently each night in the dark

    Why can't someone for once
    Care about how I feel
    Make an effort to satisfy me
    Make me feel that their feelings are real

    Keep me feeling safe
    Grasping me tight in their arms
    Making me attracted to them
    Not only for their looks, but because of their charm

    But no I don't receive those things
    Never even received a necklace or a ring
    Nothing ever real or material
    Just anything sexual is all I can achieve

    But one day this girl is gonna find that
    Oh please believe
    A beautiful man who sees my geniune personality
    Who wants me for me
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    remember dealing with boyz they like to play
    but a true worthy man will understand ya way
    he whom will see da essence of ya soul
    know ya worth is more then gold ......i hear ya here
     
  3. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Why can't someone for once
    Care about how I feel
    Make an effort to satisfy me
    Make me feel that their feelings are real"

    There is someone and that person is you. That was a heartfelt poem and we all go through it and still sometimes go through it now. You can stop the cycle when the answer to your question is "you" and your feelings are definately real. Wonderful poem!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are worth more, so do look for more. Boys look at the package alone, someone with maturity looks inward as well. I feel what you're saying, and you expressed those thoughts very well.
     
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