Black Poetry : Contemplation of Words/Thoughts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Feb 23, 2002.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I

    am

    drawing

    a

    blank ...

    and

    it

    may

    be

    the

    best

    thing

    I've

    ever

    drawn ...

    I

    must

    learn

    to

    remember more

    my

    senses

    become

    fine-ly

    tuned

    instruments

    of what it is

    to be

    human

    hue

    you

    man

    woman

    womb

    beyond

    be - yond

    I

    can't

    get

    beyond this

    blank

    this

    drawing

    of

    lines

    that

    stretch

    and

    reach

    farther

    than

    my

    mental

    will

    carry

    me

    fine-ly tuned

    instruments

    of humanity

    that won't

    orchestrate

    forced

    words

    that

    conform

    to the

    thoughts

    of

    an

    audience

    of

    blind

    readers

    and

    deaf

    listeners

    I

    am

    drawing

    a

    blank ...

    and

    it

    may

    be

    the

    best

    thing

    I've

    ever

    drawn





    (c) FINDING SO(u)LUTIONS
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sherykah

    Thank you for your response... I'm glad you were feelin' this piece... such an inspirational friend you are to us all...keepin' us rememberin' that the flow is somewhere within...

    Riding On My Blank is the inspiration that came from your words sistah friend!!

    Thank you much!!

    N2 :)
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think you've found the so(u)lution for dealing with so many things. Excellent Poet. Thank you.

    BE
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I do feel you on this.... yes, I most certainly do.

    Thank you

    a
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE

    Thank you for the read.....yes... I've found the so(u)lution! :wink:

    N2 :)
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sustah A

    Thanks for feelin' me on this piece.

    :) N2
     
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