Black Poetry : contemplating...........

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  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****...
    this is my life....my...
    i...my....

    my life i can't regret/
    only 20 yrs(old) and feelin like this is it-we set/
    away to death like tha sunsets/
    only natural to give life when one ends../so it begins...
    tha cycle starts all over again,all over tha wind/
    how can one deny his destiny/they call it blasphemy/
    when one gives in to tha sin/
    and keeps his/her heart in,
    tha negative shhhh we send/
    to each other man we came from lovers-wheres tha purity?/
    hatin on those who preach-its not new to me/
    in 2 deep burned by tha coral reef-you should see/
    all a those who say they learned-but tha few who teach/
    funny how fate overturns-and changes it m.o./
    i'm just anotha grabber of hope-'bout to let go/
    3 minutes turn to 3 hrs/
    just wonderin when its my time to go dun,
    and see flowers/
    6 feet under/ a deep slumber/
    i have faith/ so heaven's sweet summer will do me great/

    im out...

    copyrightDaCommissionRecords2003
     
  2. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is spoken very well...
    beautiful
    It has been said " the poet can only sin in denying his true nature" Flow on tho
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice vibe poet!
     
  4. Mind~$oul

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    feelin the emotion in this


    one luv
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo great title
    great piece to go with it

    this is deep man
    you were stretching the thought of that brain
    keep thinking poet - it will come
    just be patient

    peace

    DSS
     
  6. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really did just write this on tha spot...
    blkthunder-sin is in us all man...thanx for peepin tha flow...
    rich-i swear to god you're everywhere!!lmao-thanx for checkin this one out....prolly better spiitin it in 'spkoen word' though-whut you think??
    so'ja-no doubt comrad....thanx for the advice...sometimes tha answers you're lookin' for are right there -its just timing....


    one
     
  7. Kimdricka

    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice...;)
     
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    i really enjoyed this piece
     
  9. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte flow....
    peace!
     
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