Black Poetry : ...contemplating you.

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    why am I… NOT surprised
    to find that this entire time
    you’ve been soft-ly blowing my
    mind & admitted-ly I’m…
    just like the petals from
    a dandelion caught in a
    gentle spring breeze…
    …my wits are s c a t t e r ing
    in a zillion different directions
    & you’re standing at the center
    of my mental&emotional
    intersection…
    single handed-ly supply-ing
    those kisses…
    that manufacture other kisses
    those caresses…
    that conjure sweeter caresses
    those conversations…
    that lead to deeper conversations
    & those emotions…
    that implore even more
    intense emotions (within me)
    & its hard to be complete-ly
    logical when every fiber of my
    being is communicating
    the need to stop think-ing &
    “just feel” you…

    (so I’ve decided to do… just that.)


    © SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved
     
  2. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was really cool. Written very differently. I liked it.
    *Emma*
     
  3. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4 Snaps Up!!!!

    Well, actually, it could get a gillion snaps up!!!!
    My sis done done da **** thang once again.
    I'm so jealous! Love ya
     
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    Umm Hmm...

    now you're doing what I've been telling ya to do...

    Just flow with the feelings... :wink:

    Another wonderful piece of work Elayne!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AlwaysThanks.


    GeeQue. yep! i guess you final-ly gave me some
    advice that i could consider useful! :lol: but really!!
    thanks for the read my dear! 'preciate cha!

    Dani. jealous of what!??... chile puh-leeze!! you
    always know just what to say to make me feel all
    special & stuff!! :D thanks lil sis! :heart:

    Emma. glad you enjoyed the read!! thanks for
    takin' the time to stop by!! :)
     
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    Shining the beacon on you!!! This one was powerful.
     
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    ga,

    queen. i'm a fan. keep doing that love thang it is so wonderful to behold.

    verb
     
  8. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful scribe..so full of life!

    keep putting your thang down sistah,
    dee
     
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    *grabbin' my versaces*

    you have so many "shades" of love poetry than there are shades of blue..

    this wuz tyte :cool:
     
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    Sunshower~

    I think whut I dig most about what you do... is that you keep it so fresh and so new!

    I'm neva dissapointed!

    Madd Love
    Reas

    (and I know I didn't pick with you on this one hea so you betta appreciate it! lol)
     
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