Black Poetry : Consumed with the thoughts of you

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  1. FattnBeautiful

    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All day my mind is consumed with the thoughts of you
    What are you doing?
    Are you thinking of me?
    I would love to kiss you and feel your arms around me
    To hear your sexy and smooth voice

    How did you do this to me?
    How did I allow you in my mind?
    In my heart?

    Am I selfish?
    Is this fair?
    Fair that I want you?
    Fair that you want me?

    What the hell did you do to me?
    Making me feel things I haven't felt in such a long time
    What am I going to do with you?
    Should I give in with no care?
    No care of what might happen to what we have? What we share?

    All day my mind is consumed with thoughts of you
    Why is this happening to me?
    You opened something inside of me
    that I wasn't suppose to share

    Now you have a piece of that
    Why aren't I taking it back?
    Why haven't I said goodbye?

    What the hell did you do to me
    To have me so rapped up into you?
    I even have thoughts of missing you
    All day my mind is consumed with the thought of you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime we can fine ourselves mixed in a motion of thoughts
    and feeling to have and hold that we now have open doors we
    never felt would ever open ....i know this so well myself have thoughts !!!!
     
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    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Rich.
     
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    You've penned that feeling of being wrapped around someone's finger, oh so well. It's definitely all consuming.
     
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    You are so right. Thank you watzinaname.
     
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