Black Poetry : Consumation!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by msluciousb, Dec 17, 2002.

  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I contemplate, the final date I can't wait
    Does thought and time abate, do we debate
    or do we wait or do we just consumate?
    Arms entwine your lips divine, in two two
    time my dream has arrived you are finally
    mine.
    My hips move close, we hear cupid boast of
    this time well spent.
    Of his arrows that he sent.
    To the lover's cup that flows and the lips that
    curl like bows, heads bow in shy realization.
    Shall we consumate?
    Legs wrap around backs that sweat and slide
    on sheets that come off a bed that rocks and
    rolls like Tina Turner,"Rolling On The River" and
    make me shake and shiver...
    Consumation! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
    BJS(C)2002
     
  2. FeLoNy

    FeLoNy Member MEMBER

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    hmm hmm hmm
    legs wrap around back huh

    nice flow...has my imagination running wild

    700
     
  3. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Umm Hmm...

    Luscious,

    You've consummated this flow mos' def!!!

    Good work!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out now !!
    don't start dis coz i can get
    wooooweeee! msb.
    nice vibe on consumation !

    got my eyez on da prize !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  5. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Arms entwine your lips divine"

    Nice words here
    Kind of serpentine if you know what I mean
    flow on tho
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can I answer this question????PLEASE!!!
     
  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you my brotha's!

    You know MSLB can go there when the mood hits...so I spits what hits...and this just hits....and it fits!
    Blessings On Ya Houses!:kiss: