Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Blk Kween, Nov 4, 2001.
HE kisses my neck
Caresses, holds my body
..I think of ANOTHER man
in another time and in another place...
and do you wish things could be different...
I'm feelin the emotion here....
To be with someone and love another, the painfulness of love. Nice Haiku.
Madd Sistahly Love
where ya heart be
love works like that !
feel him thoughts of another
u say dem wordz gurl!!!
I liked this--the is something about Hiaku that forces a compression of thought, so we must say it right the first time--this was well done--Amun-Ra
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ooooh! Deep. better not speak your thoughts.
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