Black Poetry : constant thoughts of the other HE (haiku)

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  1. Blk Kween

    Blk Kween Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HE kisses my neck
    Caresses, holds my body
    ..I think of ANOTHER man
     
  2. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in another time and in another place...

    and do you wish things could be different...

    nice haiku...


    K
     
  3. epiphany

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    Kween....

    I'm feelin the emotion here....

    Epiphany :heart:
     
  4. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kween,

    To be with someone and love another, the painfulness of love. Nice Haiku. :)

    Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    where ya heart be

    love works like that !
    feel him thoughts of another
    u say dem wordz gurl!!!;)
     
  6. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow!

    I liked this--the is something about Hiaku that forces a compression of thought, so we must say it right the first time--this was well done--Amun-Ra


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  7. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooooh! Deep. better not speak your thoughts.
     
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