Black Poetry : "CONSEQUENCE"

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Another stain upon thousand years
    filled in screams and bloodlust fears
    fragments of power conflicted maze
    from the shadow of inner blaze
    laying inside slumbering tears
    stain streets of memories of thy peers

    Voices in unison call
    black ember and darken hall
    cage in struggle fate now fade
    un-sharpen life tormented souls made
    lost in da tempest of drowning desires
    rage and pain become a flaming fire

    Bouncin off da worlds wall
    million of cries i can hear them all
    freedom nowhere seen
    living this unjustice dream
    blue black steel of cold
    bodies in poverty forever hold

    Embraced by this labled mold
    O' how my eyes gettin old
    all around is dark shades of hope
    life's hearts very broke
    while dancin in the spool of foreverness
    name into numbers and unhappiness

    Soon the curtains come down
    brothers and sisters ware a frown
    help is the whisper the only sound
    in the consequence .......:danger:

    These are consequence we make upon ourselves
    then cage , jailed and forgotten to rotten away
    we have to change within ourselves to reverse the mold
    so we can be heard , freedom is only a word our minds can
    be free upon thinking , your soul will pay the time for any
    silly crime in this system that was design for consequence of
    da black mindz .......make yo stand i am my brother's keeper
    in the new years coming future of us ...................................

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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$:
    What a powerful write. This is some real talk right here.
    Something I am always talking to my son about
    "consequences"
    I really enjoyed this.


    Much luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes our choices we make harms us deeply
    from the living we inflict upon our lives
    we choose the path yet so many traped
    inside the mental slavery of yesteryears
    that has reflected our beings .................
    thankz sista dear for feeling my message
     
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    what we face daily has returned !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes what we face daily. Sometimes we think that the consequences will magically avoid us, sometimes we don't see the lasting effects those consequences can have. Well written piece.
     
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    Wow I felt the darkness in the Consequence of bad choices. $$RICH$$ this is powerful.

    Voices in unison call
    Bouncin off da worlds wall
    million of cries i can hear them all
    O' how my eyes gettin old
    all around is dark shades of hope
    life's hearts very broke
    while dancin in the spool of foreverness

    Soon the curtains come down
    brothers and sisters ware a frown

    help is the whisper the only sound
    in the consequence .......:danger:



    So many lines of true passion here $$RICH$$
    I haven't read much of your flow recently, but you penned something great here.
     
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    Hey Rich!
    keep reminding us of the beautiful struggle. for every action there is a consequence...forever mindful...Thanks bro!
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow this was very heavy go tto give it to ya I can't rhyme like this without getting depressed can't put flowers on a struggle that never should've been good piece and keep up the good works rich (hey rich peep this if you have time http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=51166
     
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    thankz family time we take notice and see what is before us all
     
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    Another year upon us as we now must face ourselves and the future
    and know theconsequence
     
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