Black Poetry : connection

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by dnommo, Dec 17, 2003.

  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We walk two paths trying
    to find the point when they
    cross so that we can walk
    one road together;

    we have chosen two paths
    carrying our dreams and hopes
    and with each step we look
    at the other hoping to meet

    I often wonder if we will allow
    Our paths to cross again at a time
    When the direction is one and our
    Hearts are strong to meet the day;

    What does the future hold when we
    Choose not to look past today and yet
    Tomorrow may bring a solution that
    Neither is willing to embrace as true;

    Can love never fail when our minds
    Get in the way of the work God has
    Planned and the dreams we seek don’t
    Measure on equal balances of life;

    Will we be more than a dream, a hope
    Of happiness manifested by our minds
    Without the comfort of counseling with
    One who authored our steps into the day

    Today I shall rest my eyes, take one more
    Inhale of life as I know it and lay my head
    On the road which I walk hoping to vanish
    Into the sands of fresh fallen rains of dreams;
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is so relaxing..
    very calm vibe to this
    Peace
     
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    I FEEL U....THIS WAS REAL DEEP AND CALM.....
    I ALSO DIG YA SIG MAN......
    ITS TRUE......YOU REALLY ARENT A MAN TILL YOU'RE LIVING GODS WILL...THATS REAL DEEP BRO...
    GIVE IT TO 'EM....


    onelove......
     
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    i feel ya on dis vibe
    smooth and calm
    i likes ya flow...indeed :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was str8 off da hook brutha u back and hitting nicely
    lovin ya work of art from the mellows
     
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    :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop:
    this flo made my heart warm...its nice and relaxing..
    feeling this one to the fullest!!!
    GOD BLESS :angel1:
     
  7. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just wanted to send some peace along the way...thank you all for the read..

    one.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dnommo .. I enjoyed the connection this flow makes.
     
  9. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you poet for your words...

    one.
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you :flamet: me with this piece...






    just ...a reflextion of an emotion i have going in me...





    beautifull Poet..


    Love l
     
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