Black Poetry : Connection

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kitana, Feb 7, 2003.

  1. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want you to be in me~
    I'm not just talking
    physically
    I want it to be
    mentally
    emotionally
    spiritually~
    I want you to complete me
    I want you to know me inside out
    and know what I'm all about
    I want us to combine
    our minds, bodies and souls
    until we reach a state of nirvana
    a place of pleasure
    that we can only reach
    when we're together~
    I want you to know
    my dreams and fears
    and why I cry the tears I cry
    why I laugh
    why I sigh~
    I want you to know me intimately
    on every level
    I want you to love me
    into a state of confusion
    so that I'm not sure where I end
    and you begin~
    I want you to love me
    and be my everything
    I want you to be in me
    endlessly

    (c) nfn
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another one for the Ladies!

    Whup it up K! We need you to hit hard with your best stuff the fella's are talking stuff about our skills...and I know we aren't going for that...This was absolutely beautiful.

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ohhhh sista K

    gurl you can put this here on a card !!!!!! Very Very Beautiful




    One
     
  4. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well "love poetry" isn't really my forte, but I got to at least help the other ladies give all these guys a run for their money...there all gettin way too confident....thanks for the read and your words...much appreciated....we ain't goin down easy!!!!!

    K
     
  5. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Zorb...I'm learnin:)

    K
     
  6. poeticdelight

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    the depths of LOVE poetry

    i'm diggin it

    tight flow :)

    pd
     
  7. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    kt.


    zorb-shun took the words right outta my
    mouth! :) this does read like a beautiful
    card!! love poetry may not be your "forte"
    ...but you may have to reconsider that!! :)

    itsallLove,
    elayne.
     
  8. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    kitana aww aww aww............................
    wayoo.......beautifull
     
  9. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pd..my thanks to you for your always supporting me...it means a lot...

    Layne...:D you know how to make me feel so good about what I do...

    liberty...if you felt it....that's all I need...

    Elmo....thanks for likin it...and you are either going to have to stop talking japanese to me or translate it..;)

    K
     
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