Quiet Poetry Lounge : Connecting with you.......

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by osEYEris, Sep 13, 2003.

  1. osEYEris

    osEYEris Member MEMBER

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    Frequently I'll cuddle with your emotions
    Carefully caressing your every worry
    Making sure the door to your heart is open
    Patience is mine, I'm in no hurry
    I'm glad to be the one you have chosen
    And by your side I will always be
    Whatever path you decide to go in
    Where ever you are, think of me

    Softly I'll massage your past heartaches
    Gently rubbing away the hurt and pain
    With Love, I'll do whatever it takes
    No it's not your fault, you are not the blame
    Your soul, your spirit I passionately embrace
    As I daringly shield you from the rain
    In my heart for you there's a special place
    And you didn't even have to sign your name

    Endless conversations to ease your mind
    A soothing melody for you I'd sing
    Romantic verses for you I'd rhyme
    A bounty of roses for you I'd bring
    Radiant, describes your face as it shines
    Refreshing Like the first day of Spring
    Gracious and beautiful time after time
    Your forever my sweet Lady, forever my Queen
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so well done i love ya flow
    keep it comming....wow!
     
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    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    This is beautiful, keep it comin!!!!
     
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    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin this.... flow
    feelin it for real..(snaps)
    beautifully expressed!
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is just stunning. Whomever has you is the luckiest in the world - no joke.
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ....................Oseyesris....................


    breath taking....

    blessfull woman she is..



    Love L
     
  7. Truman

    Truman New Member MEMBER

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    Very well said...wonderful prelude, interlude, and postlude in any romance.

    Bravo, Poet!

    Truman
     
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    UniverSouL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a very melodious and lyrical poem.

    I like the rhyming of it, simple but elegant.

    Nice.

    Keep scribing poet!

    Peace,
    UniverSouL
    the
    Essential
     
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