Black Poetry : Connect For What

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Jun 28, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ladies' fool,

    She's everything to you

    But who'd she do...

    Soooooooooo cruel?

    He makes you laugh

    Breaks your heart in two

    That super dude ain't cool :nono:

    The young at heart

    Frisky from the start

    Grown apart in time

    An hourglass,

    Running out of sand

    Takes a man-child's air

    Connect -for- what?

    Surely,

    You'll get caught

    Feeling all is lost

    And here I am ~

    Take your best damned shot

    I'm stepping off,

    A man :toast:


    Darryl Abdu Omari :thanks:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was on point i felt it more then u know
    stepping off a man indeed thanks for dis
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The many layers unexplained in a relationship. Is it worth the risk? This causes one to think, and that's a good thing.
     
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    yeah
    connecting with what ya thought
    was the best...yeah he ain't cool
    nice flow poet
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater, Watz & $$RICH$$, I am most appreciative.
     
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