Black Poetry : Confusion

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by givemefreedom, Oct 25, 2001.

  1. givemefreedom

    givemefreedom Member MEMBER

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    Today seems so cloudy,

    Tommorrow so far away.

    Yesterday is unheard of,

    The future has gone astray.

    Hope is a figment of the imagination,

    Faith has changed his name.

    Peace has become so disruptive,

    Love is playing an unfair game.

    The soul has become unreachable,

    The spirit has been broken.

    The heart beats and nothing more,

    The mind has become a simple token.

    Kindness is unheard of,

    Respect is a thing of the past.

    Charity has lost its place in the world,

    Understand has taken the seat labeled, last.

    Unhappiness is throwing a party,

    Truth has disapperaed,

    Optimism has thrown in the towel,

    Smiles has turned to tears,

    Everything has turned to nothing,

    All is on longer a choice.

    Maybe shows its face too much,

    Prayer has lost its voice.

    Questions will often go unanswered,

    Uncertanity will often show its face.

    He will tap you on the shoulder,

    and point you to the path of mercy and grace.

    The path will give direction,

    Direction will give clarity if this illusion.

    Clarity will point to him.

    He will take care of all this confusion.
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SAY THAT, SAY THAT ,SAY THAT!

    YO POETIC FLOW IS SO PURE
    READING LIKE DAVID IN SCRIPTURE
    DAYS OF RECOGNITION
    FUZZY , BLURRED VISION
    CONFUSION IS SATANS ILLUSION
    PRONOUNCING THE ABSENCE OF GOD
    LIKE DARK BLOCK OUT LIGHT
    GATHER YOUR STRENGTH FOR THIS LONG FLIGHT!
    (Finger snappin , hand clappin , foot stompin good!)
    amen,amen and amen!1:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u layed it down

    to perfection :) well said poet
     
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